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the metaphors are GORGEOUS and the parentheses at the end of each paragraph are used so skillfully and layer on more and more emotion. you also create vulnerability in this piece and it's beautiful and tbh i think i'm going to cry
there's a good balance between what I know and what I don't know. I'm obviously curious about the context but context being provided would take away relatability from many other readers and also confine the situation.
i'm in love with your writing and this piece only solidifies my admiration. it's powerful, emotional, and vulnerable, just overall incredible. i've been rereading this and it takes my breath away each time (as well as making me want to cry more).
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