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Bailee

Australia

You may be wondering what makes me different from you or the person in the corner? Well not a lot really, I write on here, on Wattpad, and singing is my life. I'm striving to one day perform on Broadway... hopefully. I honestly just love feedback!

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Hey everyone! I would really appreciate some constructive criticism. I struggle a lot with grammar. I would love to gain feedback about how I could improve this... thanks! From a girl you don't know!

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February 28, 2015

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Anger bottled up inside of me like hot, sticky sulfur. I wanted to just rip his head into pieces. At the same time as never letting go. I vigorously scribbled notes in my books. None of them made any sense. I was  furious with him. But I love him. He's my world. My oxygen. Mine. 

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