Peer Reviews

Quille (United States of America)() reviewed:

Captivity #MySentenceStarter

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Good luck in the contest!!! <3

1 day ago

Writers of the World (United States of America)() reviewed:

The Surgery

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Amazing work! This piece was good! Keep writing!

1 day ago

WhiteMountains (United States of America)() reviewed:

I hold myself together when everything falls apart

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Keep writing! <3

1 day ago

the_enclave (United States of America)() reviewed:

Chapter One: Welcome to Seagull Bay #Kickoff [Revised]

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as upsy already commented before, this piece is lovely. not in the sense that it makes the reader all warm and fuzzy inside, but rather that it is intelligently written and it sets up a story that makes the reader...

1 day ago

Mr. Colin E. (United States of America)() reviewed:

No Planet Like Earth

PROMPT: Environmental Journalism Competition 2020

Hello LynnAnna, splendid work you've done here. I don't usually do academic stuff on Write The World.com, but I found your piece on climate change to be excellent. You really did well in statistically and persuasively showing the reader how...

1 day ago

Anna_19 (United States of America)() reviewed:

In an Ocean of 1s and 0s

PROMPT: Love in Words

I loved this piece, thanks for sharing!

1 day ago

yapyapxy (Singapore)() reviewed:

Who will be Responsible for our Lives?

PROMPT: Environmental Journalism Competition 2020

This is one of the few essays I'm trying to review so it was refreshing to read about a topic I care about too! I think the title was very promising and sets up a compelling argument for why we...

1 day ago

RockSugar98 (Singapore)() reviewed:

Bits and Pieces

PROMPT: Still Lifes

You are really talented as a writer, having a very astute sense of observation and on-point description. I really appreciated how you can use easy-to-understand adjectives to evoke very strong sentiments. This alludes to a mastery of the language and...

1 day ago

Raquel (United States of America)() reviewed:

A-Z

PROMPT: 26 Sentences

1 day ago

Hanan Adi (Germany)() reviewed:

Slithering Strength

PROMPT: How to be a Good Creature

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts! I have never touched a snake before. This is a really unusual experience and it was nice to hear what you learned from it!

1 day ago

Amalia (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() reviewed:

when the children have all left home

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A hauntingly effective piece, well done!

1 day ago

Kati Keller (United States of America)() reviewed:

Narrative Without People

PROMPT: "Narrative Without People"

The word "dreary" reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe's poem "The Raven." Is there any connection intended here? I find your ending phrase/idea of a "glass curtain" very intriguing and delightful. It gives a sort of untouchable vibe to the...

2 days ago

Unicorn Mist (Australia)() reviewed:

The Silent Killer

PROMPT: Environmental Journalism Competition 2020

I also really liked how you not only thought about the direct impact of pollution but also the indirect impacts that many people don't recognise. These indirect impacts definitely mad people think and it made your text stronger.

2 days ago

Writing4Life (Australia)() reviewed:

You Pushed Me Just A Little Too Far

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Good job! You should enter this in a competition! You'd win!

2 days ago

Raquel (United States of America)() reviewed:

Hope

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This piece would be wonderful if you expanded it!

2 days ago

Kate Gardner reviewed:

my captain is a debutante: an ode to workingwomen

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No additional comment.

2 days ago

AminahMcBina (United States of America)() reviewed:

An Ancient Rivalry #taleoftwotales

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You're a really great writer! Never stop writing.

-Mina

2 days ago

Kati Keller (United States of America)() reviewed:

Fridays

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As noted above, I can relate so much to this poem and believe that countless others can as well. The sense I get from this poem is quite similar to the one I get from the song "Young Forever" (BTS)....

2 days ago

AminahMcBina (United States of America)() reviewed:

Swarm

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You're a very good story-teller! Well done!

2 days ago

RockSugar98 (Singapore)() reviewed:

Pretty Birds, War Soldiers #feb #valentine

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Your piece is, no doubt, a wonderful read. I like that you have done some research to make your characters to speak like they were in the 1940s, keep up the good work. However, there are some issues that you...

2 days ago

Kati Keller (United States of America)() reviewed:

S.G.

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I didn't see it the first time I read through this poem, but the second time, I saw how the first stanza seems to be indicating that the "you" of the poem has started gaining more confidence in him/herself-- hair...

2 days ago

Kaitlyn Reese (United States of America)() reviewed:

It's Time

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Beautiful job! Keep writing!

2 days ago

Z.Bunzigiye (Canada)() reviewed:

Solar Panels: Positive or Negative Effect on the Environment?

PROMPT: Environmental Journalism Competition 2020

Do also remember to present alternative solutions to solar panels. It's quite disappointing to learn that they're not the miracle technology that I thought they were. So maybe, as a next step, you could present the reader at the end...

2 days ago

GOLDENBRIGHT (Australia)() reviewed:

Redefining Activism

PROMPT: Environmental Journalism Competition 2020

Love your work! Keep it up!

2 days ago

Quille (United States of America)() reviewed:

Honey

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Well done! Keep writing <3

2 days ago