Overall awesome poem, I liked how you took a message and used poetry to express it. :)

This is my last review and I have enjoyed your work, so much. Everything I have read (even the pieces I didn't review) has been powerful and moving to me. I can say this honestly I related to everything you...

I loved this!! Keep writing!

I loved this piece. It's not very often that you find a short work where you can write a long review and add details and such. Excellent work, I encourage you to continue this!!

This is such a great poem and it really shifted my perspective. Through this I can visually see all the things you explained and can also see that you are an incredible poet!!

This is simply stunning! This is my favorite piece by you. It's so beautiful and the format was interesting. Great job and keep writing!!

I suggest that you separate it into shorter paragraphs to better target your ideas. You have multiple main ideas in each paragraph, and things are much more entertaining to read when they don't have bulky paragraphs.

I like the thinking that went behind this- it almost seems like you're relating it to being stuck in a mental hospital against your will, and the person who's hurting you is accusing you of being crazy, putting this piece...

I really love how it all ties together. You reiterate "don't call me yellow, for i am so much more" three times. Each time, there is a different impact and it hits you a bit harder that this girl is...

A few punctuation/ capitalization errors, but a beautifully written piece.

It's short and bittersweet and moving. congratulations :):):)

A fun review to write for a piece that was fun to read. Thanks for sharing!

As always I loved your rhyming and wording. You've built up the atmosphere really well, wonderful job on that. This just left me with so many feels, so many emotions. I love this-I love this-I love this soo much.

Awesome job. Clearly some people have read this piece all the way to the end, hat with the 13 LIKES AND ALL. XD this was a great read, I was happy to review it!

I'm sorry I couldn't really give this a proper review - I'm just so moved by it. I think only one other piece did a similar thing to me. Thank you for this, I'm in love.

-R.j.

I loved this piece. My favourite line was, "But it keeps coming back, changing like weather." That line really struck a chord with me and I loved it absolutely. "Count to ten they say" is also really beautiful- the simplicity...

I'm sorry - I gave you no actual help. I'm just a little brain broken right now about how holy this is.

Please always continue to be a writer...

-R.j.

Your descriptive tongue is somewhat mediocre and predictable; there's no life behind it until the very end. Two things can be said about this: one is that it's an easy fix, and two, it's a great introduction into using descriptive...

Okay - dude, I need way more descriptive language from you. You have good action, excessive characters, realistic and comical dialog - yet you lack a vivid tongue. I'm not asking for a lot - that would be useless and...

I really enjoy this piece and find the title correlating perfectly to the content. Keep it up!

Interesting concept. Keep up the good work.

Sorry for the late response! One thing that I can't say in any lighter terms is to make sure you know when to indent. When faced with a wall of text, readers will feel intimidated! There are some places where...

Love this! Keep writing!

Keep writing! Love this!

Keep writing! Good luck!