Peer Reviews

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Lethally Mathon (United States) reviewed:

The Prison without Boundaries

PROMPT: On Courage

I've got none. I really liked your piece. Keep writing!

about 10 hours ago

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Crow (United States) reviewed:

The Clockmaker #r&scontest

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Overall, this was very well written. Your intro and conclusion were great (especially the conclusion), and you did a great job showing the relationship between the clockmaker and the clocks. Really, my only criticism is that I wanted more details...

about 10 hours ago

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ruzahk (Australia) reviewed:

Moonbeams

PROMPT: Lunar Phrases

I thought this was a very beautiful and reflective poem. Your observances about the landscape, and way of translating that emotionally, is very astute. I think you should definitely pursue this style of piece and prompt!

about 10 hours ago

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Lia Kares (United States) reviewed:

ATTRACTED TO THE DARKNESS

FREE WRITING

I don't have a lot to say here, but I just want to encourage you to keep on writing. I really enjoyed reading this piece like I've said thousand of times in the review, and It would be sad if...

about 10 hours ago

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Megan Penn (United States) reviewed:

Battered Dreams and Fairy Wings

PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2019

Keep up the great work! You’re an amazing writer!

about 10 hours ago

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keyperofhearts (Philippines) reviewed:

A Breath

PROMPT: Smog. Smoke. Soot.

Rhymes, huh? I'm not really the type who usually writes rhymes when writing poems, but they give a great impact if you write it well. I personally think that when one writes, he/she should focus on how the reader would...

about 10 hours ago

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scripturience (United States) reviewed:

After School Cleaning Duty

FREE WRITING

I love getting insight into the lives of others, especially those who experience the same kinds of situations as me in such different ways. Very well done.

about 10 hours ago

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FrazzyH (United States) reviewed:

Lonely Star

FREE WRITING

This piece is small and mighty. It's beautiful, and it tugs at the heartstrings. Keep it up :)

about 10 hours ago

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efflorescence (United States) reviewed:

Runechild (Chapter 1)

FREE WRITING

I hope you continue to publish the rest of the chapters! This piece was really short, but it's already caught my attention, and I want to know more about Fynn's backstory.

about 10 hours ago

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Norah (United States) reviewed:

= waterfall

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Well done! I'm actually just noticing that the poem is almost shaped like a waterfall and I love it!

about 10 hours ago

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V-Rose (United States) reviewed:

Little Star

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about 10 hours ago

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aliviascoresby (United States) reviewed:

More To Life

PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2019

This song makes ME feel human and alive because I can relate to it so much.

about 11 hours ago

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H.Degg (United States) reviewed:

You...

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So cute and short but at the same time soooo powerful. Really good.

about 11 hours ago

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H.Degg (United States) reviewed:

Shadow in the Moonlight

PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2019

Loved it.

about 11 hours ago

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mason wong (United States) reviewed:

Ozone Depletion

PROMPT: Earth Day Writing Competition

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about 11 hours ago

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H.Degg (United States) reviewed:

Respect the Seas

PROMPT: Water Body

Loved this. Enjoyed reading it a lot.

about 11 hours ago

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H.Degg (United States) reviewed:

My Throne #r&scontest

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It is overall wonderful. I was speechless when I first read it. You are very talented. Keep going.

about 11 hours ago

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CrowSF (United States) reviewed:

You're the One

PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2019

about 11 hours ago

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BurningMidnightOil (United States) reviewed:

May morning

FREE WRITING

I loved this piece. Very well thought through. I have a question, if you would be so inclined to answer, what was the writing process? Did you jump around or write from beginning to end? What inspired you? Thanks:) Keep...

about 11 hours ago

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kasperoviclani@gmail.com (Australia) reviewed:

Sweetness

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I very much enjoyed this. It would be really cool if you made a whole piece filled with different moments from different people. I think you could create something very beautiful. Thank you for publishing this!

about 11 hours ago

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fatpanda (India) reviewed:

chocolate cupcakes at 11:36 pm

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I like how you bring out simple, everyday concepts and turn them out into something of their own. I feel that you wrote this piece in a hurry and/or you didn't proofread it, and that's why you have a couple...

about 11 hours ago

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Rachel Bryan (Ireland) reviewed:

Lavender

PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2019

Keep it up, and good luck on Zaire. Hope all goes well

about 11 hours ago

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Lia Kares (United States) reviewed:

The Button

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One thing I realized while reading this story is that the story seemed like a step-by-step narration or a list of stuff you did. When writing narratives, the different moments should kind of connect to each other. So, maybe, instead...

about 11 hours ago

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Aaru_Writes (United States) reviewed:

Predictable

PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2019

Beautiful song I could visualize everything you said, good job!

about 11 hours ago

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Lia Kares (United States) reviewed:

For the first time.......

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To be honest, I don't like the title of this poem which isn't a big deal at all. However, I do hope you change it to something that goes more with the story. I do get how the title could...

about 11 hours ago