Please see the highlighted comments. I think I've addressed everything else important to the review there.

Your thoughts, so original, ( and they rhyme, which is awesome!:) is so powerful and anyone, no matter where they come from will be thinking over their own life while reading this, trying to see if they are living their...

It was really bittersweet and I loved it from top to bottom. Good job, Quille.

I'm so glad you continued this! So many people begin all types of projects but find it difficult to continue but I'm happy you took on the challenge to keep going with this. I look forward to the next installment!...

This was such a great piece! This review was for getting 3rd in my contest that was a while ago, along with 5 likes. Also, I was tring to give constructive criticism, but I don't know if it was really...

It was a lovely tale to read. What a great entry for my contest!

Your writing is out of this world!

Overall, I think it is a really great story. Only thing to maybe work on would be to make sure to be specific and not general with word choice.

This was a great, succinct piece! Definitely a good motivator for anything from that mid-week slump to having a real tough day. The message was clear and deep, and the lines were thoughtful. Thank you for sharing your writing!

I'm sorry I didn't leave many highlights! There isn't much to say, honestly. Your poem is very beautiful.

Beautiful poem, so wonderfully written, with a clever rhyme scheme. I really enjoyed reading this, well done.

I really like the simple beauty of this piece. You captured both a starting moment and a memory. My only suggestions are maybe starting the beginning a little differently. Starting with the weather is overused and unnecessary a lot of...

I'll participate for sure if I have time.

Wow, wow, wow, wow!!! This piece is literal perfection :) I love the sarcasm and the way you basically shove the truth in peoples faces. Beautiful work, and keep fighting :)

I love this piece so much. I was instantly intrigued by the title and then watching the story unfold through each verse was amazing. I really liked the way you went back then and told the events from the guys...

Wow, first love this piece so much! The details and the poetic language you masterfully use add such a magical element to this piece. Also, the switch in perspectives is so easy and almost unnoticeable but, beautiful all the same....

Good job, and great twist at the end. Was not expecting that! It's nice that you wrote about something like this, because it's really cool lol :)

It was the sweetest piece I've ever read in my life. Really unexpected, but still sweet.

There is kind of a pattern in the stanzas that is broken in the fourth stanza. The third line of the previous stanzas started with the word 'To' and the fourth stanza broke this pattern. Is this on purpose? It...

Your story is so visceral and full of meaning. It is first-hand and poignant. As someone who considered herself pro-vaccine before reading this, I will admit you have made me seriously reconsider my position. Please, whatever you do, do not...

I left some notes and questions in the highlighted sections that I thought might help to enhance your piece a bit more. Thank you so much for having made me really reevaluate my negative mentality towards the capability of construction...

it i san amazing peice though you ar ean incredible writer and if you become a jernolist you would really go far. id recommend starting a blog maybe you would be really good at it seriously x

I was originally in public school until I was put into a charter school, and I've seen the difference in my education. I love this piece, and it expresses words that I don't know if I could have ever written...

I hope this peer review is helpful! Good luck!