Wonderful piece! Good luck!

This was just an amazing piece. I don't really have any comments to make about it, other than learning about how you were as a joy girl. I really love this piece.

I love the imagery and voice! The theme is also really relatable.

This is really relatable! I get horrible stage fright, too, and it's awful.

I hope this review helped! I look forward to reading more of your writing!

I just really like this a lot. I would love to read more.

Hope you are having a good day!

- Yolanda

Hey, Jackson!

This is a captivating piece you have here; you should be proud. My comments are only my opinions, so feel free to ignore them when you feel it necessary. Happy writing!

Jayda

Hi Jackson, Wonderful, wonderful job! This is such a brilliant contribution to the prompt, and it really works well for me! A small thing you might want to consider is your use of contractions and apostrophes. Being thoughtful of how...

Overall, I love that you write very frequently! Cannot wait for the coming drafts in this time-romance series. If you have any questions or want me to review another one of your pieces, feel free to comment below one of...

Hello!
Well done on this poem, it's beautiful. I hope this review is helpful, but please don't feel pressured to take any of my suggestions! Have an amazing day/night ^^
Keep Writing!
-Ruth <3

I love the title, it's beautiful! and thank you for your kind comment! i nearly just followed you back without looking at your work, but im SO glad i did!

Delightful poem! (I would like a review, you can pick anything.)

This piece honestly did not need a review at all i just loved it so much, plainly wanted to showcase your incredible writing. Congrats again on 400!

Hey, solarflair! Lovely work. Remember all my feedback is just suggestions for you to use at your discretion, writer's choice! If you have any suggestions as to how I can improve my reviews, I'd love to hear them! Have a...

Overall, I thought this was a beautiful piece that really showed what being empty is like. I found it relatable, particularly the final stanza which I thought was a beautiful ending to the piece. Amazing work :)

this piece was really nice and it reminded me of my besties
and
it made me feel things, like nostalgia (for things I've never experienced) which I believe is the greatest accomplishment for a write (to make someone feel things)

Hello, Carmen 1919! Lovely piece, I look forward to seeing further drafts and chapters be published. Remember all my feedback is just suggestions for you to use at your discretion, writer's choice! If you have any suggestions as to how...

Honestly everything you write could warrant a 1000 word review because every piece is just so beautiful. I hope you're doing well. I hope you know in your core that you deserve so much more than just survival even if...

Hey, dumbledore's army! This is a beautiful piece you have here; you should be proud. For your next draft, I would encourage you to have another look over your tense, as it seems to switch between past and present within...

Great work!

Amazing!

Great job , I think you have to explore your title little more.

Your piece was gorgeous, I love it! The things I've said are just my opinion so please do not feel the pressure to apply them in your next draft. It was beautiful though!!

I hope this review helped you in some way, and best of luck in the competition!

Great Job, I really like it. But I wants to say that you should explore your title little more.