Peer Reviews

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KOTLC123 (United States) reviewed:

One Liner

PROMPT: One-Liner

Good work!

about 14 hours ago

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Makoa Batongbacal (United States) reviewed:

Trouble Twins (#HomoSapiensStory)

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Additional comments would be nice job on the quotes of your characters talking as well because the dialogue helped the plot continue while building the character arches.

about 14 hours ago

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Charisse Marison (United States) reviewed:

Cruella De Vil

PROMPT: Open Prompt

I really liked this! i am a huge disney fan and always love anything about the villains. Great work!

about 15 hours ago

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Kahte (United States) reviewed:

A Simple Smile

PROMPT: Human Connections Essay Competition 2019

Enjoyed reading your work! Keep writing and write free

about 15 hours ago

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Mavis G. (Australia) reviewed:

The River of Life

PROMPT: Human Connections Essay Competition 2019

Just one more additional note: with the final paragraph, you switch persons from first to second. I know this is probably intentional, and it carries the moral of the story, but maybe just change it to first person (that you...

about 15 hours ago

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Milzy (Australia) reviewed:

Honesty

PROMPT: Human Connections Essay Competition 2019

Awesome job on your essay! I'm also entering the comp and would love some feedback on my essay - Forget Me Never : )

about 15 hours ago

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Milzy (Australia) reviewed:

Life: Chore, Routine, Trap.

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You did awesome! Do you mind taking a read of my story Forget Me Never? I would love some feedback : )

about 15 hours ago

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Milzy (Australia) reviewed:

The House Across The Street.

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Great Story I loved it! Would you mind giving my story Forget Me Not some peer review. I would be very grateful

about 15 hours ago

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Maryam Q (Malaysia) reviewed:

#unfinished- SECRETS

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I think it would be easier to read if you spaced out your paragraphs. Right now you have paragraphs, which is good, but it's kind of in one big block, which puts people off from reading. Otherwise, this story is...

about 15 hours ago

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Dmoral13 (United States) reviewed:

anger

PROMPT: Universal Knowledge

Using what you have, I believe you could write a beautiful poem based on it.
Keep writing!!

about 15 hours ago

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Dmoral13 (United States) reviewed:

In Her Wake

PROMPT: Tiny Love Story

I would be interested if you extended this piece.
Wonderful writing!

about 15 hours ago

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Charles Mathieu (United States) reviewed:

How we Connect?

PROMPT: Human Connections Essay Competition 2019

about 15 hours ago

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Alexus Marsh (United States) reviewed:

Life

PROMPT: One-Liner

about 15 hours ago

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K. Marie Christen (Latvia) reviewed:

Stunning #thisismyway

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Thank you for ene\tering and please be on the lookout for the results!

about 15 hours ago

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Milzy (Australia) reviewed:

Epilogue

PROMPT: Human Connections Essay Competition 2019

Would you mind giving me some peer review? I'm not finished yet but would love some feedback

about 15 hours ago

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Maryam Q (Malaysia) reviewed:

The War is Never Fully Won #HomoSapienStories

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Please write a fantasy novel or two or three or four.

about 15 hours ago

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Dmoral13 (United States) reviewed:

black cat

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

This piece was amazing! Keep writing!

about 15 hours ago

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Dmoral13 (United States) reviewed:

Dúirt Mé Leat Go Raibh Mé Breoite

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Wonderful piece!

about 15 hours ago

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babybluelamentations (United States) reviewed:

The Wooden Detective

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I enjoyed reading this. Good job!

about 15 hours ago

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K. Marie Christen (Latvia) reviewed:

Journey of Tears

PROMPT: Human Connections Essay Competition 2019

This is a great essay!

about 15 hours ago

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Ali.Madin19 (Ireland) reviewed:

The Life Theory

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I love this, it's amazing and really its perfect the way it is.

about 15 hours ago

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catkins_21 (United Kingdom) reviewed:

The bright vibrant flowers

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It is a lovely poem, but I think it could be more effective if you made the rhyme more consistent and/or possibly finished on a rhyme. It sounds unintentional and every word in your writing should have purpose.

about 15 hours ago

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Amaya_frost (United Kingdom) reviewed:

the aftermath

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LOVE ITTT!!!!!

about 15 hours ago

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Kenneth Keng (United States) reviewed:

A short poem

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about 15 hours ago

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Living My Life Through Writing (United States) reviewed:

Losing you

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There is nothing that can really make this piece better than it is.

1 day ago