Peer Reviews

Ava Marie (Canada) reviewed:

Whirlwind of change

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

This is amazing!! Good luck in the competition, I have a feeling you're going to do really well!!!

about 14 hours ago

.amelia. (Singapore) reviewed:

hallowed heart

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Well, nope. but just wanna say, great job!! :) (Sry for the long overdue review :p)

about 14 hours ago

danaguirguis (United States) reviewed:

Everlasting Time

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

good luck!

about 14 hours ago

Hope_Snaffle[ChildOfGod] (United States) reviewed:

Beautiful Moments: Prologue (FOOTNOTES!!!!)

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I really enjoyed reading this. It has a unique curiosity about it that creates a wonder in the reader. The reader has to keep reading. This new world is enticing, and they are quickly attached to struggling Star. Questions rise...

about 14 hours ago

cosmosbuilder (United States) reviewed:

Diddly-Squat

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This might sound random but it really reminds me of an article I saw about a family who were trying to add a words in the dictionary that their late relative made up. I love that I was able to...

about 14 hours ago

SamRose (United States) reviewed:

Drowning in the Sound.

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Good work! This is great! :))

about 14 hours ago

SamRose (United States) reviewed:

Whirlwind of change

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

I hope this reaches you in time to help! Good luck in the comp!

about 14 hours ago

rwong (United States) reviewed:

what the biggest eyes of vision see | Review-for-Review!

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

super well written!! please please please know that all my comments are purely suggestional so don't feel obligated to apply them! i hope this review is helpful to you! oh and i think i prefer the one i reviewed more...

about 14 hours ago

carlaguirguis (United States) reviewed:

Meteor shower

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

You are doing a great job. I cannot stress how much I liked this poem.

about 14 hours ago

danaguirguis (United States) reviewed:

Thrifting the world

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

Good luck!

about 14 hours ago

danaguirguis (United States) reviewed:

She Is Everything That I Am Not

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

Good luck!

about 14 hours ago

In Which Yaya Writes (United States) reviewed:

dear society,

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

Great job! I really hope this is helpful, but feel free to disregard everything I’ve just wrote XD.

-Yaya

about 14 hours ago

Zirong (Singapore) reviewed:

Drowning in a sea of meaning

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In all, this piece is amazing, as always :) I really enjoy reading your pieces! And, considering you are only 15, you are definitely going places! Can't wait to talk more with and read more from you! <3

about 14 hours ago

Khadeejah bint Malik (Philippines) reviewed:

funambulism

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about 14 hours ago

Zirong (Singapore) reviewed:

Another world (*PLEASE REVIEW*) (message box )

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

Before I answer the questions in your message to readers, I'll make a suggestion on the content. I think the link between the normal and italicised stanzas can be clearer. I can vaguely understand how they work together but not...

about 14 hours ago

Zirong (Singapore) reviewed:

A Persona Can Be Changed; A Person Cannot

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

Just a little add-on here: I notice that this poem is written in the format of a sonnet(I hope I'm correct), but maybe it fits better with some other structures? One thing about the sonnet that can limit the effectiveness...

about 14 hours ago

sunshinetea (Canada) reviewed:

Thrifting the world

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

about 14 hours ago

bookmagic (United States) reviewed:

The Ocean, My Friend

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

about 14 hours ago

kate13 (United States) reviewed:

mosaic of broken glass

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

I really enjoyed reading and reviewing your poem! I hope my feedback was helpful! If you have a spare moment, it would be awesome if you could check out my submission for this competition! Any feedback you can give at...

about 14 hours ago

Arabella Longaker (United States) reviewed:

Liturgy of Cut Forsythia

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Everytime I hear this piece it gets better. You’re a spectacular writer and each time I see your name on the dashboard, I know I won’t be disappointed.

about 14 hours ago

V-Rose (United States) reviewed:

Night (extended)

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I hope this review helps! I am so sorry that it took me so long to get to it. Great job and keep writing!
-V

about 14 hours ago

In Which Yaya Writes (United States) reviewed:

nanas yellow towels

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

Remember all my suggestion are optional, and feel free to completely disregard them XD. Great job with the piece!

about 14 hours ago

barelybear (United Kingdom) reviewed:

unhinge

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

Hey! I hope this review has helped! I’ve tried to give you some constructive feedback, so that you can continue to develop this piece and make some more jaws drop :) (Don’t worry if you don’t agree with what I’ve...

about 14 hours ago

Avril (Canada) reviewed:

Seeking Meaning.

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I hope these suggestions are helpful to you, but no worries if they aren't! This is a lovely piece of poetry and I'm so glad I got to read it. Feel free to reach out if you ever need another...

about 14 hours ago