This is amazing!! Good luck in the competition, I have a feeling you're going to do really well!!!

Well, nope. but just wanna say, great job!! :) (Sry for the long overdue review :p)

good luck!

I really enjoyed reading this. It has a unique curiosity about it that creates a wonder in the reader. The reader has to keep reading. This new world is enticing, and they are quickly attached to struggling Star. Questions rise...

This might sound random but it really reminds me of an article I saw about a family who were trying to add a words in the dictionary that their late relative made up. I love that I was able to...

Good work! This is great! :))

I hope this reaches you in time to help! Good luck in the comp!

super well written!! please please please know that all my comments are purely suggestional so don't feel obligated to apply them! i hope this review is helpful to you! oh and i think i prefer the one i reviewed more...

You are doing a great job. I cannot stress how much I liked this poem.

Good luck!

Good luck!

Great job! I really hope this is helpful, but feel free to disregard everything I’ve just wrote XD.

-Yaya

In all, this piece is amazing, as always :) I really enjoy reading your pieces! And, considering you are only 15, you are definitely going places! Can't wait to talk more with and read more from you! <3

Before I answer the questions in your message to readers, I'll make a suggestion on the content. I think the link between the normal and italicised stanzas can be clearer. I can vaguely understand how they work together but not...

Just a little add-on here: I notice that this poem is written in the format of a sonnet(I hope I'm correct), but maybe it fits better with some other structures? One thing about the sonnet that can limit the effectiveness...

I really enjoyed reading and reviewing your poem! I hope my feedback was helpful! If you have a spare moment, it would be awesome if you could check out my submission for this competition! Any feedback you can give at...

Everytime I hear this piece it gets better. You’re a spectacular writer and each time I see your name on the dashboard, I know I won’t be disappointed.

I hope this review helps! I am so sorry that it took me so long to get to it. Great job and keep writing!
-V

Remember all my suggestion are optional, and feel free to completely disregard them XD. Great job with the piece!

Hey! I hope this review has helped! I’ve tried to give you some constructive feedback, so that you can continue to develop this piece and make some more jaws drop :) (Don’t worry if you don’t agree with what I’ve...

I hope these suggestions are helpful to you, but no worries if they aren't! This is a lovely piece of poetry and I'm so glad I got to read it. Feel free to reach out if you ever need another...