Good work!

Additional comments would be nice job on the quotes of your characters talking as well because the dialogue helped the plot continue while building the character arches.

I really liked this! i am a huge disney fan and always love anything about the villains. Great work!

Enjoyed reading your work! Keep writing and write free

Just one more additional note: with the final paragraph, you switch persons from first to second. I know this is probably intentional, and it carries the moral of the story, but maybe just change it to first person (that you...

Awesome job on your essay! I'm also entering the comp and would love some feedback on my essay - Forget Me Never : )

You did awesome! Do you mind taking a read of my story Forget Me Never? I would love some feedback : )

Great Story I loved it! Would you mind giving my story Forget Me Not some peer review. I would be very grateful

I think it would be easier to read if you spaced out your paragraphs. Right now you have paragraphs, which is good, but it's kind of in one big block, which puts people off from reading. Otherwise, this story is...

Using what you have, I believe you could write a beautiful poem based on it.
Keep writing!!

I would be interested if you extended this piece.
Wonderful writing!

Thank you for ene\tering and please be on the lookout for the results!

Would you mind giving me some peer review? I'm not finished yet but would love some feedback

Please write a fantasy novel or two or three or four.

This piece was amazing! Keep writing!

Wonderful piece!

I enjoyed reading this. Good job!

This is a great essay!

I love this, it's amazing and really its perfect the way it is.

It is a lovely poem, but I think it could be more effective if you made the rhyme more consistent and/or possibly finished on a rhyme. It sounds unintentional and every word in your writing should have purpose.

LOVE ITTT!!!!!

There is nothing that can really make this piece better than it is.