Peer Reviews

Sky kingdom

Elise Nascimento (United States) reviewed:

Dear Bully...

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Overall awesome poem, I liked how you took a message and used poetry to express it. :)

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ryxxry (United States) reviewed:

Thoughts

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This is my last review and I have enjoyed your work, so much. Everything I have read (even the pieces I didn't review) has been powerful and moving to me. I can say this honestly I related to everything you...

about 1 hour ago

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Dmoral13 (United States) reviewed:

Loss

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I loved this!! Keep writing!

about 1 hour ago

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spearmint (United States) reviewed:

Clockwork Precise

PROMPT: Turned to Stone

I loved this piece. It's not very often that you find a short work where you can write a long review and add details and such. Excellent work, I encourage you to continue this!!

about 1 hour ago

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SparklingEmbers (United States) reviewed:

thoughts from an airplane

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This is such a great poem and it really shifted my perspective. Through this I can visually see all the things you explained and can also see that you are an incredible poet!!

about 1 hour ago

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Majestically Awkward Manatee (United States) reviewed:

Growing Down (April Poetry Piece that I will probably forget about)

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This is simply stunning! This is my favorite piece by you. It's so beautiful and the format was interesting. Great job and keep writing!!

about 1 hour ago

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Rinzerella (United States) reviewed:

Bandersnatch: A Deeper Focus on the 2018 Film that Challenges Reality as we Know it

PROMPT: Film Review Competition 2019

I suggest that you separate it into shorter paragraphs to better target your ideas. You have multiple main ideas in each paragraph, and things are much more entertaining to read when they don't have bulky paragraphs.

about 1 hour ago

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CCReed (United States) reviewed:

~ Change ~

PROMPT: Open Prompt

I like the thinking that went behind this- it almost seems like you're relating it to being stuck in a mental hospital against your will, and the person who's hurting you is accusing you of being crazy, putting this piece...

about 1 hour ago

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Kahasai (United States) reviewed:

yellow

PROMPT: A Pair of Poems

I really love how it all ties together. You reiterate "don't call me yellow, for i am so much more" three times. Each time, there is a different impact and it hits you a bit harder that this girl is...

about 1 hour ago

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Lopiekins (United States) reviewed:

My Star

PROMPT: Turned to Stone

A few punctuation/ capitalization errors, but a beautifully written piece.

about 2 hours ago

Songbirds

Ellie O'Grady (United States) reviewed:

Dreamland

PROMPT: Everyday Magic

It's short and bittersweet and moving. congratulations :):):)

about 2 hours ago

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Ellie O'Grady (United States) reviewed:

The Wanderer

PROMPT: In the House

A fun review to write for a piece that was fun to read. Thanks for sharing!

about 2 hours ago

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Nonny21 (Maldives) reviewed:

=Tonight=

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As always I loved your rhyming and wording. You've built up the atmosphere really well, wonderful job on that. This just left me with so many feels, so many emotions. I love this-I love this-I love this soo much.

about 2 hours ago

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Ellie O'Grady (United States) reviewed:

beautiful woman

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Awesome job. Clearly some people have read this piece all the way to the end, hat with the 13 LIKES AND ALL. XD this was a great read, I was happy to review it!

about 2 hours ago

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R.j.Elsewhere (Australia) reviewed:

just let me stay & suck in the world

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I'm sorry I couldn't really give this a proper review - I'm just so moved by it. I think only one other piece did a similar thing to me. Thank you for this, I'm in love.

-R.j.

about 2 hours ago

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Nonny21 (Maldives) reviewed:

=The Rush of Anger=

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I loved this piece. My favourite line was, "But it keeps coming back, changing like weather." That line really struck a chord with me and I loved it absolutely. "Count to ten they say" is also really beautiful- the simplicity...

about 2 hours ago

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R.j.Elsewhere (Australia) reviewed:

A Bloody Sunday Afternoon

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I'm sorry - I gave you no actual help. I'm just a little brain broken right now about how holy this is.

Please always continue to be a writer...

-R.j.

about 12 hours ago

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R.j.Elsewhere (Australia) reviewed:

River on Fire ~ pt. one

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Your descriptive tongue is somewhat mediocre and predictable; there's no life behind it until the very end. Two things can be said about this: one is that it's an easy fix, and two, it's a great introduction into using descriptive...

about 15 hours ago

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R.j.Elsewhere (Australia) reviewed:

Tops and Gutter: Part 1

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Okay - dude, I need way more descriptive language from you. You have good action, excessive characters, realistic and comical dialog - yet you lack a vivid tongue. I'm not asking for a lot - that would be useless and...

about 15 hours ago

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alexacpierce (United States) reviewed:

I Stand Upon Their Horizons

PROMPT: The Vistas Beyond

I really enjoy this piece and find the title correlating perfectly to the content. Keep it up!

about 15 hours ago

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alexacpierce (United States) reviewed:

Earth's Living Room

PROMPT: The Vistas Beyond

Interesting concept. Keep up the good work.

1 day ago

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Crescent (United States) reviewed:

December of a not so popular/mean girl

PROMPT: My December Writing Competition 2018

Sorry for the late response! One thing that I can't say in any lighter terms is to make sure you know when to indent. When faced with a wall of text, readers will feel intimidated! There are some places where...

1 day ago

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Dmoral13 (United States) reviewed:

Missing#myfirstcontest

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Love this! Keep writing!

1 day ago

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Dmoral13 (United States) reviewed:

#myfirstcontest six word story

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Keep writing! Love this!

1 day ago

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Dmoral13 (United States) reviewed:

Knit Booties~ #myfirstcontest

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Keep writing! Good luck!

1 day ago