Peer Reviews

Toikupu~estVehementChirography (New Zealand) reviewed:

The Demi Warrior Queen

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Thank you for writing this piece, I never knew what a Demigirl, or I'm assuming Demiboy, is before.

about 17 hours ago

Toikupu~estVehementChirography (New Zealand) reviewed:

Stars

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That's all, I think. Want to hear more!

about 17 hours ago

Elle Urie (United States) reviewed:

Unregrettable

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I love the very last line. And I love how you reuse words but make it sound good as you do.

about 17 hours ago

Zinniav (United States) reviewed:

Maybe

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I felt all warm inside reading this. Really, excellent job!

about 17 hours ago

Cosmogyral (United States) reviewed:

august [unspoken]

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This is an incredible balance and show of selfishness.

about 17 hours ago

U S E R N A M E S (United States) reviewed:

As These Feelings Grow

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All too relatable, I've ruined a lot of good things ( typically by overthinking) I'm in love with this work and I'm so thankful that you shared. It was a pleasure to review this piece.

2 days ago

Lata.B (United States) reviewed:

Drive all Night Out Into the Darkness, I Need a New Locale, I Need a Girl (Guy) Who Calls me Baby

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I hope this was helpful! Have a wonderful day! :D

3 days ago

Busssy.Beee (United States) reviewed:

A Sickening Discovery||Review for Review||PLEASE REVIEW

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Well, I haven't really read the novel series that this piece was based off of, therefore I don't think I am the best at making suggestions on content. I mostly focused on some technical things here and there, but other...

3 days ago

Jason_claire :) (United States) reviewed:

untitled (A LOT ADDED *Please give this story a chance:)*)

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Most of the things I commented on were grammar things that are easy to fix. I apologize if I seem to come off bossy in my comments. All of them are just suggestions I think you would be beneficial in...

3 days ago

Deep_Breaths (United States) reviewed:

A Message from Neville Longbottom:

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PLEASE write more, they're so good!

3 days ago

KBridget (United States) reviewed:

My little poem for my sister's boyfriend

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I'm a Leo, so i'm very protective of my family and friends. I relate to the feelings shown in this on a deep level. I love how you portrayed everything and your talent is boundlessly evident. Keep it up!

3 days ago

madelinewagner (United States) reviewed:

Why the Sky is Black

PROMPT: Mid-January Grab Bag

i love this story very much

3 days ago

x.Anonymous.x (United Kingdom) reviewed:

Damien

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You are a truly amazing writer keep going.

3 days ago

squirrelwriter (United States) reviewed:

blackbirds burn. A duologue

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I love how the songs you chose work together and feel cohesive; if I weren't familiar with some of them, I wouldn't have guessed that this poem was made of lyrics. If I were to make a main suggestion, it...

3 days ago

Emi (Revival Year #NEWYEAR) (United States) reviewed:

Socks and Shoes

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4 days ago

rosewall'd (United States) reviewed:

Socks and Shoes

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I highlighted the sections that I liked, also the words I saw were misspelled.
Otherwise than that, I thought this was a really cute, simple piece.

4 days ago

amelodramaticwriter (New Zealand) reviewed:

Deus lo Vult

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It's a very gripping piece of work that captures life's ups and downs - the battles with our demons and angels. The struggle in life - in the end worth fighting for. Deus lo Vult. I very much enjoyed this...

4 days ago

peridot (United States) reviewed:

Risks

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I really love this piece! It's hilarious yet opens our minds to the dangers of the world. Yes, it's important to take risks!

5 days ago

wavewriter (United States) reviewed:

Light Without the Dark

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I hope this review helps! Great work with this poem; I can't wait to see what you do next.

Happy writing!

-wavewriter

5 days ago

Cosmogyral (United States) reviewed:

eve

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This is a leisurely slow read, I wanted to savour it because it was so nice, and so warm. When I reached the end, I truly wasn't ready to leave.

5 days ago

Zinniav (United States) reviewed:

The Law of the Hungry

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Great job. A pleasure to read and review:)

5 days ago

itzjojo (United Kingdom) reviewed:

Perhaps There's a Boyfriend Under My Bed

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Thank you so much for this amazing piece, it's insightful and so relatable! You definitely have a talent in observing and putting it to paper so passionately! Never cease writing so beautifully and with so much care, the world definitely...

5 days ago

itzjojo (United Kingdom) reviewed:

Trust

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Thank you so much for sharing your masterpiece with the community, please hold onto your creativity and talent forever so you can continue to bless the world with your beautiful self and writing.

5 days ago

itzjojo (United Kingdom) reviewed:

i'm hiding from reality because it's the only thing i know how to do

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I hope you are doing okay and getting the help you need, remember that there is a loving community here, which I am proud to be apart of, which opens their arms towards anything you'd like to share. You are...

5 days ago

Busssy.Beee (United States) reviewed:

Dear Justyce- Unflinching & Relevant

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I hope you will be able to keep these comments in mind, though it's still up to you whether you want to use it or not. I wish it was helpful, but if you find any part of it confusing,...

5 days ago