I have fallen in love with your writing style in these pieces I've reviewed. I can't wait to see more of your work! :D

This is a beautiful piece and I enjoyed reviewing it. Do let me know if you have any questions! All the best with your writing :)

This is a beautiful piece and I enjoyed reviewing it. Do let me know if you have any questions! All the best with your writing :)

Good piece! Give it a glance-over for commas and clarity, but I enjoyed this a lot!

I would've liked to know if there were any specific Bible verses that helped K turn to Christ. However, I still think the piece is great, so good job!

i loved this piece! so cool how it's a story but also a poem--so great.

Good luck! Keep writing! If you ever write more with this "story", I'd love to read it!!!

I really hope this helps! I tried my best to catch any errors, or parts that looked weird. It's a really good piece and I have great faith in you. Go forth and win the contest!!! <3

Hello SunV, it's your friendly neighborhood Senior Peer Reviewer and I've very much enjoyed reviewing this piece of yours. I love the inspiration for it and ultimately beautiful drama you added in, spectacular. While there are some things in need...

I can sense the strength and maturity in your writing. The comparisons and intense descriptions have the capability to drive the reader to tears! Keeping oneself fresh with grammar is a good habit but don't let its dryness dampen your...

Good luck with your letter, it is genuinely amazing! I loved reading it. It was amazing how connected to Annabelle I felt while reading it. You’re on to something amazing!!

Welcome to WtW. We are a wonderful community of young writers. Make friends, they'll help you a lot. Participate, review the pieces that catch your eye. It's a safe haven for a lot of us- I really do hope it...

Keep up the awesome writing! :3

Really awesome short poem with such an emotional ending and message. I can't wait to see where this idea goes! :)

Great piece! I see you've gone through a few revisions already, which is so good!! Its only getting better. Tell me if you revise this again!

Well done Katie! This is a really interesting piece :D Keep Writing <3

Thank you for sharing this! Feel free to ask me any questions, and I'd be happy to review more of your work! Just let me know.

Thank you for sharing! Feel free to ask any questions, and let me know if you want me to review a revision of this piece!

This is some of the best writing I've read thus far on Write the World. You capture the readers with your first line and hold it until the end. Amazing, amazing work.

I'm so sorry I took so long to get to this, but hopefully, this was helpful. I hope you're having a good day. <3

This is a lovely piece and I'd love to read another draft if you write one. Do let me know if you have any questions! All the best with your writing :)

I love the way that you love Daniel without even meeting him. Your obvious excitement at 1) seeing him and 2) having him as a brother is contagious!

Keep working on this piece! There's so much potential here!

When revising your letter, the main thing you can work on is writing in a more formal style (reducing the number of exclamation marks, having a formal tone, etc.) I would also double check your grammar (adding a space after...

Overall, this is a strong letter, with the major thing that could be added being to establish a sense of depth into what she felt and how that affected what she did. You've got a couple easily fixed grammar mistakes...