Toikupu~estVehementChirography (New Zealand) reviewed:
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Thank you for writing this piece, I never knew what a Demigirl, or I'm assuming Demiboy, is before.
about 17 hours ago
Toikupu~estVehementChirography (New Zealand) reviewed:
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That's all, I think. Want to hear more!
about 17 hours ago
Elle Urie (United States) reviewed:
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I love the very last line. And I love how you reuse words but make it sound good as you do.
about 17 hours ago
Zinniav (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Mid-January Grab Bag
I felt all warm inside reading this. Really, excellent job!
about 17 hours ago
Cosmogyral (United States) reviewed:
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This is an incredible balance and show of selfishness.
about 17 hours ago
U S E R N A M E S (United States) reviewed:
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All too relatable, I've ruined a lot of good things ( typically by overthinking) I'm in love with this work and I'm so thankful that you shared. It was a pleasure to review this piece.
2 days ago
Lata.B (United States) reviewed:
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I hope this was helpful! Have a wonderful day! :D
3 days ago
Busssy.Beee (United States) reviewed:
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Well, I haven't really read the novel series that this piece was based off of, therefore I don't think I am the best at making suggestions on content. I mostly focused on some technical things here and there, but other...
3 days ago
Jason_claire :) (United States) reviewed:
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Most of the things I commented on were grammar things that are easy to fix. I apologize if I seem to come off bossy in my comments. All of them are just suggestions I think you would be beneficial in...
3 days ago
Deep_Breaths (United States) reviewed:
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PLEASE write more, they're so good!
3 days ago
KBridget (United States) reviewed:
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I'm a Leo, so i'm very protective of my family and friends. I relate to the feelings shown in this on a deep level. I love how you portrayed everything and your talent is boundlessly evident. Keep it up!
3 days ago
madelinewagner (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Mid-January Grab Bag
i love this story very much
3 days ago
x.Anonymous.x (United Kingdom) reviewed:
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You are a truly amazing writer keep going.
3 days ago
squirrelwriter (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Mid-January Grab Bag
I love how the songs you chose work together and feel cohesive; if I weren't familiar with some of them, I wouldn't have guessed that this poem was made of lyrics. If I were to make a main suggestion, it...
3 days ago
rosewall'd (United States) reviewed:
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I highlighted the sections that I liked, also the words I saw were misspelled.
Otherwise than that, I thought this was a really cute, simple piece.
4 days ago
amelodramaticwriter (New Zealand) reviewed:
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It's a very gripping piece of work that captures life's ups and downs - the battles with our demons and angels. The struggle in life - in the end worth fighting for. Deus lo Vult. I very much enjoyed this...
4 days ago
wavewriter (United States) reviewed:
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I hope this review helps! Great work with this poem; I can't wait to see what you do next.
Happy writing!
-wavewriter
5 days ago
Cosmogyral (United States) reviewed:
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This is a leisurely slow read, I wanted to savour it because it was so nice, and so warm. When I reached the end, I truly wasn't ready to leave.
5 days ago
Zinniav (United States) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
Great job. A pleasure to read and review:)
5 days ago
itzjojo (United Kingdom) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
Thank you so much for this amazing piece, it's insightful and so relatable! You definitely have a talent in observing and putting it to paper so passionately! Never cease writing so beautifully and with so much care, the world definitely...
5 days ago
itzjojo (United Kingdom) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
I hope you are doing okay and getting the help you need, remember that there is a loving community here, which I am proud to be apart of, which opens their arms towards anything you'd like to share. You are...
5 days ago
Busssy.Beee (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Book Review Competition 2021
I hope you will be able to keep these comments in mind, though it's still up to you whether you want to use it or not. I wish it was helpful, but if you find any part of it confusing,...
5 days ago