Good luck in the contest!!! <3

Amazing work! This piece was good! Keep writing!

Keep writing! <3

as upsy already commented before, this piece is lovely. not in the sense that it makes the reader all warm and fuzzy inside, but rather that it is intelligently written and it sets up a story that makes the reader...

Hello LynnAnna, splendid work you've done here. I don't usually do academic stuff on Write The World.com, but I found your piece on climate change to be excellent. You really did well in statistically and persuasively showing the reader how...

I loved this piece, thanks for sharing!

This is one of the few essays I'm trying to review so it was refreshing to read about a topic I care about too! I think the title was very promising and sets up a compelling argument for why we...

You are really talented as a writer, having a very astute sense of observation and on-point description. I really appreciated how you can use easy-to-understand adjectives to evoke very strong sentiments. This alludes to a mastery of the language and...

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts! I have never touched a snake before. This is a really unusual experience and it was nice to hear what you learned from it!

A hauntingly effective piece, well done!

The word "dreary" reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe's poem "The Raven." Is there any connection intended here? I find your ending phrase/idea of a "glass curtain" very intriguing and delightful. It gives a sort of untouchable vibe to the...

I also really liked how you not only thought about the direct impact of pollution but also the indirect impacts that many people don't recognise. These indirect impacts definitely mad people think and it made your text stronger.

Good job! You should enter this in a competition! You'd win!

This piece would be wonderful if you expanded it!

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You're a really great writer! Never stop writing.

-Mina

As noted above, I can relate so much to this poem and believe that countless others can as well. The sense I get from this poem is quite similar to the one I get from the song "Young Forever" (BTS)....

You're a very good story-teller! Well done!

Your piece is, no doubt, a wonderful read. I like that you have done some research to make your characters to speak like they were in the 1940s, keep up the good work. However, there are some issues that you...

I didn't see it the first time I read through this poem, but the second time, I saw how the first stanza seems to be indicating that the "you" of the poem has started gaining more confidence in him/herself-- hair...

Beautiful job! Keep writing!

Do also remember to present alternative solutions to solar panels. It's quite disappointing to learn that they're not the miracle technology that I thought they were. So maybe, as a next step, you could present the reader at the end...

Love your work! Keep it up!

Well done! Keep writing <3