Peer Reviews

Yellow Sweater (United States) reviewed:

Loop (please review; potential comp entry)

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Wonderful piece! Good luck!

about 5 hours ago

The Unicorn (Canada) reviewed:

The Joy-Girl

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This was just an amazing piece. I don't really have any comments to make about it, other than learning about how you were as a joy girl. I really love this piece.

about 5 hours ago

Excuse Me While I S p a r k l e (United States) reviewed:

i miss the time before imagined futures became imagined pasts

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I love the imagery and voice! The theme is also really relatable.

about 5 hours ago

Excuse Me While I S p a r k l e (United States) reviewed:

Vroom Vroom!

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This is really relatable! I get horrible stage fright, too, and it's awful.

about 5 hours ago

Excuse Me While I S p a r k l e (United States) reviewed:

red balloon

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I hope this review helped! I look forward to reading more of your writing!

about 5 hours ago

Yolanda (Australia) reviewed:

A Place For Poetry

PROMPT: "The Places We’ll Go"

I just really like this a lot. I would love to read more.

Hope you are having a good day!

- Yolanda

about 5 hours ago

Chai Tea (Australia) reviewed:

A Place For Poetry

PROMPT: "The Places We’ll Go"

Hey, Jackson!

This is a captivating piece you have here; you should be proud. My comments are only my opinions, so feel free to ignore them when you feel it necessary. Happy writing!

Jayda

about 5 hours ago

Blue Moons (United States) reviewed:

A Place For Poetry

PROMPT: "The Places We’ll Go"

Hi Jackson, Wonderful, wonderful job! This is such a brilliant contribution to the prompt, and it really works well for me! A small thing you might want to consider is your use of contractions and apostrophes. Being thoughtful of how...

1 day ago

Ravi Tej Guntuku (United States) reviewed:

8:52 pm

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Overall, I love that you write very frequently! Cannot wait for the coming drafts in this time-romance series. If you have any questions or want me to review another one of your pieces, feel free to comment below one of...

1 day ago

Writing4Life (Australia) reviewed:

The Cycle of Life

PROMPT: Nature and Environmental Poetry Competition 2021

Hello!
Well done on this poem, it's beautiful. I hope this review is helpful, but please don't feel pressured to take any of my suggestions! Have an amazing day/night ^^
Keep Writing!
-Ruth <3

1 day ago

hi i'm jackson ;) (United States) reviewed:

immortal breath | or perhaps | the utter truth of summers

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I love the title, it's beautiful! and thank you for your kind comment! i nearly just followed you back without looking at your work, but im SO glad i did!

1 day ago

celisec (United States) reviewed:

Best Friends (review 4 review?)

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Delightful poem! (I would like a review, you can pick anything.)

1 day ago

FantasyOtter12 (United States) reviewed:

just stay here tonight | a thank you note and a muse

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This piece honestly did not need a review at all i just loved it so much, plainly wanted to showcase your incredible writing. Congrats again on 400!

1 day ago

thebookishfey (Canada) reviewed:

a very embarrassing and cheesy love poem

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Hey, solarflair! Lovely work. Remember all my feedback is just suggestions for you to use at your discretion, writer's choice! If you have any suggestions as to how I can improve my reviews, I'd love to hear them! Have a...

1 day ago

lainey5 (Canada) reviewed:

Greyscale

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Overall, I thought this was a beautiful piece that really showed what being empty is like. I found it relatable, particularly the final stanza which I thought was a beautiful ending to the piece. Amazing work :)

1 day ago

@thestupidbard (India) reviewed:

Best Friends (review 4 review?)

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this piece was really nice and it reminded me of my besties
and
it made me feel things, like nostalgia (for things I've never experienced) which I believe is the greatest accomplishment for a write (to make someone feel things)

1 day ago

thebookishfey (Canada) reviewed:

The Cafe On The Corner: Chapter Two

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Hello, Carmen 1919! Lovely piece, I look forward to seeing further drafts and chapters be published. Remember all my feedback is just suggestions for you to use at your discretion, writer's choice! If you have any suggestions as to how...

1 day ago

Yolanda (Australia) reviewed:

i've ached to the point of creation| a mess of ink stains on my fingertips

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Honestly everything you write could warrant a 1000 word review because every piece is just so beautiful. I hope you're doing well. I hope you know in your core that you deserve so much more than just survival even if...

1 day ago

Chai Tea (Australia) reviewed:

Counting the stars

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Hey, dumbledore's army! This is a beautiful piece you have here; you should be proud. For your next draft, I would encourage you to have another look over your tense, as it seems to switch between past and present within...

1 day ago

celisec (United States) reviewed:

Iron Graveyard

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Great work!

1 day ago

celisec (United States) reviewed:

if milliseconds were lifetimes

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Amazing!

1 day ago

Lucky Sharma (India) reviewed:

sweet dreams

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Great job , I think you have to explore your title little more.

1 day ago

Helena (Australia) reviewed:

She's Been A Million Girls | I Am Sorry If You Understand and Relate

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Your piece was gorgeous, I love it! The things I've said are just my opinion so please do not feel the pressure to apply them in your next draft. It was beautiful though!!

4 days ago

FantasyOtter12 (United States) reviewed:

Forest of Weeping Willows

PROMPT: Nature and Environmental Poetry Competition 2021

I hope this review helped you in some way, and best of luck in the competition!

4 days ago

Lucky Sharma (India) reviewed:

The Meaning Of Friendship

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Great Job, I really like it. But I wants to say that you should explore your title little more.

4 days ago