Thank you for writing this piece, I never knew what a Demigirl, or I'm assuming Demiboy, is before.

That's all, I think. Want to hear more!

I love the very last line. And I love how you reuse words but make it sound good as you do.

I felt all warm inside reading this. Really, excellent job!

This is an incredible balance and show of selfishness.

All too relatable, I've ruined a lot of good things ( typically by overthinking) I'm in love with this work and I'm so thankful that you shared. It was a pleasure to review this piece.

I hope this was helpful! Have a wonderful day! :D

Well, I haven't really read the novel series that this piece was based off of, therefore I don't think I am the best at making suggestions on content. I mostly focused on some technical things here and there, but other...

Most of the things I commented on were grammar things that are easy to fix. I apologize if I seem to come off bossy in my comments. All of them are just suggestions I think you would be beneficial in...

PLEASE write more, they're so good!

I'm a Leo, so i'm very protective of my family and friends. I relate to the feelings shown in this on a deep level. I love how you portrayed everything and your talent is boundlessly evident. Keep it up!

i love this story very much

You are a truly amazing writer keep going.

I love how the songs you chose work together and feel cohesive; if I weren't familiar with some of them, I wouldn't have guessed that this poem was made of lyrics. If I were to make a main suggestion, it...

I highlighted the sections that I liked, also the words I saw were misspelled.
Otherwise than that, I thought this was a really cute, simple piece.

It's a very gripping piece of work that captures life's ups and downs - the battles with our demons and angels. The struggle in life - in the end worth fighting for. Deus lo Vult. I very much enjoyed this...

I really love this piece! It's hilarious yet opens our minds to the dangers of the world. Yes, it's important to take risks!

I hope this review helps! Great work with this poem; I can't wait to see what you do next.

Happy writing!

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This is a leisurely slow read, I wanted to savour it because it was so nice, and so warm. When I reached the end, I truly wasn't ready to leave.

Great job. A pleasure to read and review:)

Thank you so much for this amazing piece, it's insightful and so relatable! You definitely have a talent in observing and putting it to paper so passionately! Never cease writing so beautifully and with so much care, the world definitely...

Thank you so much for sharing your masterpiece with the community, please hold onto your creativity and talent forever so you can continue to bless the world with your beautiful self and writing.

I hope you are doing okay and getting the help you need, remember that there is a loving community here, which I am proud to be apart of, which opens their arms towards anything you'd like to share. You are...

I hope you will be able to keep these comments in mind, though it's still up to you whether you want to use it or not. I wish it was helpful, but if you find any part of it confusing,...