I've got none. I really liked your piece. Keep writing!

Overall, this was very well written. Your intro and conclusion were great (especially the conclusion), and you did a great job showing the relationship between the clockmaker and the clocks. Really, my only criticism is that I wanted more details...

I thought this was a very beautiful and reflective poem. Your observances about the landscape, and way of translating that emotionally, is very astute. I think you should definitely pursue this style of piece and prompt!

I don't have a lot to say here, but I just want to encourage you to keep on writing. I really enjoyed reading this piece like I've said thousand of times in the review, and It would be sad if...

Keep up the great work! You’re an amazing writer!

Rhymes, huh? I'm not really the type who usually writes rhymes when writing poems, but they give a great impact if you write it well. I personally think that when one writes, he/she should focus on how the reader would...

I love getting insight into the lives of others, especially those who experience the same kinds of situations as me in such different ways. Very well done.

This piece is small and mighty. It's beautiful, and it tugs at the heartstrings. Keep it up :)

I hope you continue to publish the rest of the chapters! This piece was really short, but it's already caught my attention, and I want to know more about Fynn's backstory.

Well done! I'm actually just noticing that the poem is almost shaped like a waterfall and I love it!

This song makes ME feel human and alive because I can relate to it so much.

So cute and short but at the same time soooo powerful. Really good.

Loved it.

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Loved this. Enjoyed reading it a lot.

It is overall wonderful. I was speechless when I first read it. You are very talented. Keep going.

I loved this piece. Very well thought through. I have a question, if you would be so inclined to answer, what was the writing process? Did you jump around or write from beginning to end? What inspired you? Thanks:) Keep...

I very much enjoyed this. It would be really cool if you made a whole piece filled with different moments from different people. I think you could create something very beautiful. Thank you for publishing this!

I like how you bring out simple, everyday concepts and turn them out into something of their own. I feel that you wrote this piece in a hurry and/or you didn't proofread it, and that's why you have a couple...

Keep it up, and good luck on Zaire. Hope all goes well

One thing I realized while reading this story is that the story seemed like a step-by-step narration or a list of stuff you did. When writing narratives, the different moments should kind of connect to each other. So, maybe, instead...

Beautiful song I could visualize everything you said, good job!

To be honest, I don't like the title of this poem which isn't a big deal at all. However, I do hope you change it to something that goes more with the story. I do get how the title could...