I was attracted to this piece because of the intriguing title. I think that you could enhance the quality of this piece by giving readers more of a hint about the plot and setting. You did, however, do well in...

I love how the author (you!) allow the reader to reach the conclusion by themselves about what happened to Dennis, which was a bone-chilling realization, and was really so much better unsaid. If the writer had said specifically that Jared...

i like how the song's lyrics fit the story completely. it is a forlorn scenery summed up in a song.

Thank you for writing this piece, I thoroughly enjoyed reading and reviewing it! I hope you find my feedback useful, but do remember its only my opinion, some parts of where I believe could be improved, you may disagree with...

It's a really cool piece. It's very dialogue based and set in the scene. Apart from a few grammatical errors, I really like it. Personally though I feel like adding some description of the setting would really help lift the...

All in all, I thought this article was great. If I could, I would totally subscribe to a magazine that published a piece like this!

Well done! Keep up the excellent work:)

Please keep writing.

I really enjoyed this poem. You take the scientific concepts of atoms and explore it in a much more story driven and meaningful concept through your writing. I think that's a pretty cool thing to do. You talk about the...

Thank you for writing this piece, I thoroughly enjoyed reading and reviewing it! I hope you find my feedback useful, but do remember its only my opinion, some parts of where I believe could be improved, you may disagree with...

I like it, most people don't need to describe emotions but sometimes it is a relief when people do so you know that you aren't the only one who feels that way.

respect for the spiders!

I totally agree that running into spider webs is not a delight. They plaster themselves on your face and refuse to release their hold! The struggle is real. I'm impressed at how you were able to portray this unappealing encounter...

Though only four lines, this piece holds a well of meanings. You did really well in creating a 'hiker's' setting, while also stating some profound points.

All the little actions and feelings that the cause of anticipation gives to people can be a long, long list. But you manage to grab a handful of them and weave them through a short poem format into a story,...